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Instead of writing long, flowing sentences ("fluff"), aim for shorter, concise phrasing ("substance").

Fluff versus Substance

Describing the Client: Best Practices for Word Choice & Editing Overused, Inappropriate, and Vague Language

Hilary Higgins

Crystal Love

Clear & Concise Writing

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